Feedback From Crit

After a crit, I decided that my good was too scattered and not focused enough.

I decided to look at my 'good' and re evaluate what i liked about it.

So what is good?

- PREDICTING THE FUTURE.

eg. 1950's retro futurism. In the 1950's they made predictions that we would have flying cars and that there could be possibly colony's on the moon.

I want to produce designs similar to this, but from 2010 looking into 2050 or maybe later.

After talking to Lorenzo, he gave me the idea of producing a range of products that came under different categories. For Example.

- COMMUNICATIONS
- TECHNOLOGY
- MOTORSPORT
- WEAPONARY
- MILITARY
- FASHION
- ARCHITECTURE
- INDUSTRY
- ADVERTISEMENT
- SPORT
- SOCIALISING
- EDUCATION
- PUBLIC TRANSPORT
- MUSIC
- ENVIRONMENT

I also had the idea that I could use a range of printing techniques to show my ideas ranging from blueprint's to printing on clear acetate.
I thought that putting my ideas and designs in a time capsule would also be really good way of encompassing them all together as one unit of work. This would also give me a chance to play around with printing techniques such as embossing.

My target audience is also something that i would have to take into consideration.

WHO ARE THE TARGET AUDIENCE?

- The target audience could either be people who are my age in 2050 (so roughly 70) or they could be students design students of 2050.

- As I am placing my designs in a time capsule I would like students in 50 years time to look at my designs and have the same experience I did when i looked at the the ideas of the future from the 1950's. I would prefer this because it would give them a better in sight into the past and get them to think about the future, hence forth broadening their minds to the concept.